First of all, I'm not too happy with it...I won't point out specifics, but I think its kinda sloppy. There's more to it, but if no one else realizes it, then there's no need to point them out, ne?
I tried to capture a sad feel to it...
But anyways, like always, let me know what you think!
I don't see what you don't like about it! Though I can understand. I recently just made my first Fruits Basket fanart and I'm not happy with it either. But this really is amazing. I just love it!